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    Default Re: Certificado de Estudios - Studies Certificate

    absolutely nothing wrong with "enrolled in" or "entered this institution".

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    Question Re: Certificado de Estudios - Studies Certificate

    I feel something is happening to the fluidity in the second parragraph:

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    CERTIFICATE OF STUDIES
    In the City of Asuncion, Republic of Paraguay, on the 4th day of May of 2009, Attorney NAME, General Secretary of the Universidad Americana (American University) Certifies that:
    Mister NAME, I.D. NUMBER and RUA (Student Record Number) NUMBER enrolled in this academic institution in the year YEAR having successfully completed the courses in the curriculum for the field of COMPUTER SCIENCE ENGINEERING and, as recorded in our files, his grades are expressed as follows:
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    I think "having" is one of the problems... because the paragraph goes like this "Certifies that: Mister... enrolled in... having... and... his grades are...". Without the having in the middle makes more sense to me. Maybe a comma after the year.

    What do the experts think? Thanks in advance!

    Mauricio.-
    Last edited by mrei; 05-27-2009 at 02:58 PM.

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    Default Re: Certificado de Estudios - Studies Certificate

    I'm not an expert...but I like it. very fluid and academic sounding
    vicente

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    Default Re: Certificado de Estudios - Studies Certificate

    ok as it is.

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    Vicent! you are an expert! hehe
    Thanks Hermit again!

    For majority of votes I leave it as it is then.

    Thank you all!

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