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    Quote Originally Posted by CaliforniaMan View Post
    Perpernauta will have to share royalties if this song makes it big... hahaha !

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    Estoy contigo, California.

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    Los hombres son superiores a las mujeres porque Alá les otorgó la primacia sobre ellas. Portanto, dió a los varones el doble de lo que dió a las mujeres. Los maridos que sufrieran desobediencia de sus mujeres pueden castigarlas: abandonarlas en sus lechos, e incluso golpearlas.
    No se legó al hombre mayor calamidad que la mujer."


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    Quote Originally Posted by vicente View Post
    Hola Exx

    Me gusta tu versión. Suena mejor pero pepernauta dice que quiere solo 5 o 6 sílabas por línea.

    " why I just can't follow rules" debe ser "why can't I just follow rules", no?
    Sí claro,

    Veamos, cinco o seis sílabas:

    I just can't get enough
    no, I want more and more<---------- o : I always want more
    I don't understand
    why I can't follow rules
    ¿Qué te parece Peper?
    Los hombres son superiores a las mujeres porque Alá les otorgó la primacia sobre ellas. Portanto, dió a los varones el doble de lo que dió a las mujeres. Los maridos que sufrieran desobediencia de sus mujeres pueden castigarlas: abandonarlas en sus lechos, e incluso golpearlas.
    No se legó al hombre mayor calamidad que la mujer."


    El Corán (libro sagrado de los musulmanes, recitado por Alá a Maomé en el siglo VI)


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    jajajaja ningún problema solo que para eso tendrían que venir a Buenos Aires Argentina y firmar como coautores de la letra...jajajaja y solo pueden firmar tres personas en la letra y tres en la música!! jajaja dieron buenas opciones,
    pero...la estructura es así...

    la primera linea
    Can't get enough (puede tener 5 o 6 sílabas)por lo tanto "I can't get enough" puede entrar en la métrica rítmica,también "Can't get as much"

    la segunda linea puede tener hasta 10 sílabas
    no! the more i get the more i want
    ----creo que esta frase esta bien, realmente es necesario cambiarla "no, I just want more and more" podría funcionar al igual que, "I want even more than what I possess"...repito, la frase "the more i get the more i want" realmente necesita ser cambiada por otra? porque me gusta, es una expresión que no se usaría? es literalmente "mientras mas tengo mas quiero"

    i don't understand ---"can't comprehend this mess" me gusta...pero no se si "i don't understand" necesita ser cambiado...en función de que dice -no puedo entender, y no "no puedo comprender este desastre"

    why can't I go by the book...(esta mal la expresión dicha de esta manera?) "why I just can't follow rules" puede ser un remplazo

    "why can't I behave decently!" me gusta también puede ser una opción

    podría quedar así

    I can't get enough
    I want even more than what I possess
    I don't understand
    why can't I behave decently

    o

    I can't get enough
    No! the more I get the more I want
    I don't understand
    why I just can't follow rules
    luego sigue

    I wish I could fly
    Out in the sky
    but when I try
    I fall so hard
    Last edited by exxcéntrica; 05-23-2014 at 07:10 AM. Reason: spelling, I hope you don't mind

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    Quote Originally Posted by pepernauta View Post


    i don't understand ---"can't comprehend this mess" me gusta...pero no se si "i don't understand" necesita ser cambiado...en función de que dice -no puedo entender, y no "no puedo comprender este desastre"
    can't comprehend this mess = I cannot understand this situation. A situation that is very complicated or difficult to deal with.


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    Quote Originally Posted by pepernauta View Post

    luego sigue

    i wish i could fly
    Out in the skay
    but when i try
    I fall so hard

    Flying is my desire
    up in the firmament
    but when I attempt it
    hard I plummet

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    Quote Originally Posted by pepernauta View Post

    jajajaja ningún problema solo que para eso tendrían que venir a Buenos Aires Argentina y firmar como coautores de la letra...jajajaja y solo pueden firmar tres personas en la letra y tres en la música!! jajaja
    There is always a solution for everything. We can form a company and the company rep can sign ... :-)

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    Quote Originally Posted by CaliforniaMan View Post
    There is always a solution for everything. We can form a company and the company rep can sign ... :-)
    I second that

    Los hombres son superiores a las mujeres porque Alá les otorgó la primacia sobre ellas. Portanto, dió a los varones el doble de lo que dió a las mujeres. Los maridos que sufrieran desobediencia de sus mujeres pueden castigarlas: abandonarlas en sus lechos, e incluso golpearlas.
    No se legó al hombre mayor calamidad que la mujer."


    El Corán (libro sagrado de los musulmanes, recitado por Alá a Maomé en el siglo VI)


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    jajajaja noooo! the lyrics are mine, mine only, my precious!!! (gollum) jajajajajajajajajaja ....the song can be shit...are you shure you want a piece of it jajajajajajaja
    sigo con la duda de si realmente esta frase necesita ser cambiada

    "the more I get the more I want" que tiene de malo?
    Last edited by pepernauta; 05-23-2014 at 11:34 AM.

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    Remember Carole King's I feel the earth move when she says "I feel the sky tumbling down...". You can also use that for people tripping over or falling down.
    Also, I would say "Listening to people, all sounds the same..." as it may fit with the beat of the song.

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    I beginning to think we're being slicked.
    vicente

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