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    Thank you vicente!

    I edit my past original text because I made few changes. Now, this is my new attempt in english, with your help obviously...

    Words never reach, words are a failure of imagination.
    Facing the music, there are no words. The sun bursts, light is born, play the wind, our moon shines, your heart trembles. (The) sound is emotion. Sounds like this for many years or just like ten minutes ago. It sounds again and sounds new, pure, different, beloved...
    You only have to listen and say nothing...

    I am still having doubts with...lo que suena es la emocion

    Any other help will be so appreciated!

    Cheers!!!!

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    Hi Fontana

    Try this:

    Emotion is sound, sounding thus for many years or only minutes ago, it sounds again and sounds new, pure, different, beloved...
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    What about this?

    Words never reach, words are a failure of imagination.
    Facing the music, there are no words. The sun bursts, light is born, play the wind, our moon shines, your heart trembles. What it sounds is the emotion. Sounding this this for many years or only minutes ago. It sounds again and sounds new, pure, different, beloved...
    You only have to listen and say nothing...

    Merry Christmas vicente!

    P.D. Please, check again the original text in spanish...thanks again!

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    Hi Fontana

    What IT sounds is the emotion is NOT good English.

    What sounds is the emotion. Sounding THUS (not this)

    Thus means "that way" or "like", as in asi

    Lo que suena es la emocion. Suena asi desde hace muchisimos aņos o desde hace solo 10 minutos.

    Lo que suena means "that which sounds", of course.

    Suggestion: That sound is emotion. Sounding thus (thus sounding) for many years or, only minutes ago.
    Last edited by vicente; 12-26-2011 at 11:41 AM.
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    Hey Fontana!! So sorry for the very late reply... Iīve been ill and then it was Christmas/New Year, you know. Not sure if itīs too late for this help but just in case, here goes:

    "I believe in the magic of music and XinX its wonderful effect of opening up hearts like flowers.
    I believe in the rapture of music and XinX its songs that shoot you, not to hurt you, just to choose you and then enlighten you.
    I believe in those songs that can hold back the blow OF time and stop the time suddenly.
    I believe in songs that can take us away from sadness and its cursed companion, the pain.
    I also believe that a single song would be enough to heal us or make us ill, to destroy us or save us...
    This is the story of a fragmented heart or maybe the story of our fragmented hearts...

    I think thatīs it. Good job, Fontana!!!

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    Hey Fontana!! So sorry for the very late reply... Iīve been ill and then it was Christmas/New Year, you know. Not sure if itīs too late for this help but just in case, here goes:

    "I believe in the magic of music and XinX its wonderful effect of opening up hearts like flowers.
    I believe in the rapture of music and XinX its songs that shoot you, not to hurt you, just to choose you and then enlighten you.
    I believe in those songs that can hold back the blow OF time and stop the time suddenly.
    I believe in songs that can take us away from sadness and its cursed companion, the pain.
    I also believe that a single song would be enough to heal us or make us ill, to destroy us or save us...
    This is the story of a fragmented heart or maybe the story of our fragmented hearts...

    I think thatīs it. Good job, Fontana!!!

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