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    Hola hice un pequeño resumen de mi perfil laboral en inglés, si alguien puede ayudarme a ver si tengo algún error o a mejorar la redacción, se lo agradeceria muuucho. Ahi va:

    Graphic designer graduated in 2003, more than 6 years of experience working in web design, over this time my tasks were to design and implement several projects as web sites, portals, mini sites, e-commerce, online ads, multimedia and some works on corporate identity and prlnted projects. Mainly, I have worked for customers on the automotive, financial, insurance, and mass consumption, among others.

    Currently i'm employed as graphic designer at Televisa Publishing at the special projects department (multimedia and web).

    I have creative skills and conceptualization for communicate clear graphic messages, accurate and efficient especially in the Internet environment.

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    Quote Originally Posted by javitamara
    Hola hice un pequeño resumen de mi perfil laboral en inglés, si alguien puede ayudarme a ver si tengo algún error o a mejorar la redacción, se lo agradeceria muuucho. Ahi va:

    Graphic designer graduated in 2003, more than 6 years of experience working in web design, over this time my tasks were to design and implement several projects as web sites, portals, mini sites, e-commerce, online ads, multimedia and some works on corporate identity and prlnted projects. Mainly, I have worked for customers on the automotive, financial, insurance, and mass consumption, among others.

    Currently i'm employed as graphic designer at Televisa Publishing at the special projects department (multimedia and web).

    I have creative skills and conceptualization for communicate clear graphic messages, accurate and efficient especially in the Internet environment.
    Nadie?........supongo que esta todo OK.... ¬¬

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    Graphic designer graduated in 2003, more than 6 years of experience working in web design,

    This first part isn't a sentence. You will have to decide if you want to write in sentences or in bullet points, and then be consistent.
    La primera parte no es una oración completa. Tienes que tomar la decision de escribir o en oraciones o en puntos, y entonces hazlo sistematicamente.
    The rest of what you wrote is in sentences:

    El resto de lo que has escrito es oraciones:


    During this time my responsibilities were to design and implement several projects involving web sites, portals, mini sites, e-commerce, online ads, and multimedia, and some projects on corporate identity and prlnted projects.

    Corporate identity and printed projects are not parallel. One refers to content and the other refers to media. Couldn't a project be a printed project on corporate identity?

    Mainly, I have worked for customers on the automotive, financial, insurance, and mass consumption areas, among others.

    Currently I'm employed as graphic designer at Televisa Publishing in the special projects department (multimedia and web). If special projects department is the actual name of the department, you should use capital letters.

    I have creative skills and conceptualization abilities to communicate clear graphic messages (no comma here) accurately and efficiently, especially in the internet environment.

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