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    Exclamation i need help !

    i need to translate this, please help me :



    Preámbulo:

    Existe un echo que predomina entre nosotros, espero que podamos cambiarlo, pero no tengo intención de hacerlo para mi propio beneficio y este es que sólo en los momentos difíciles la gente empieza a comprender lo difícil que es ser dueño de sus sentimientos y pensamientos, en estos momento es este de hecho un requisito, una transición elemental para ser capaz de darse cuenta de que cada uno de nosotros tiene la capacidad de pensar por nosotros mismos (sé que lo intentaste y crees tener la libertad de hacerlo, pero mira tu entorno , mira a tu alrededor y analiza la constante influencia que recibes )


    here is my try:


    Preamble:

    There is a dominating fact now among us, I hope we can change it,
    but I do not intend to do this for my own benefit, this is: that only during hard times do people come to
    understand how difficult it is to be master of their feelings and thoughts, in this times this is a indeed a requisite, one elemental transition to be able of realize that each of us has the ability to think for ourself (I know you tried and think may you have the freedom to do it, but look at your environment, look around you and analyze the influence constant)

    please fix it, if its necessary or propose an new entry.
    [i need perfect grammatical sense.]

    thank you !

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    Default Re: i need help !

    If you adapt the first draft....

    Existe un Hecho que predomina entre nosotros, lo difícil que es ser dueño de sus sentimientos y pensamientos; Espero que podamos cambiarlo, sólo en los momentos difíciles la gente empieza a comprender lo difícil que es pero no tengo intención de hacerlo para mi propio beneficio.
    En estos momento es este de hecho un requisito, una transición elemental para ser capaz de darse cuenta de que cada uno de nosotros tiene la capacidad de pensar por nosotros mismos (sé que lo intentaste y crees tener la libertad de hacerlo, pero mira tu entorno , mira a tu alrededor y analiza la constante influencia que recibes )

    There's something standing between us, the fact that it's so hard to be the owner of one's own thoughts and feelings. I hope we can change that, but only when in distress do people realize how difficult it is.
    It is not my intention doing it for my own benefit.
    Right now. this is in fact a requirement, a basic transition to be able to realize that each of us is capable of thinking by ourselves (I know you`ve tried and now belive you are capable of achieving it, but look around you, analyze the constant influences you are recieving)

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