Spanish rhyme

[Dabeed]

I am working on a little ditty to say to my Spanish friends and would like to know if it sounds OK. It goes like this:

"Mira para acá! y para allí y para allá." It is supposed to mean 'Looky here! and over there and over there."

( I've noticed that when the first part is spoken, it sounds like "mira pa cá". )

[SandraT]

I don't understand exactly what you want but if you're finding a way to say so, you can also say

¡¡¡Mira pa' cá, mira pa' llí, mira pa' llá!!!

[Dragona]

I am working on a little ditty to say to my Spanish friends and would like to know if it sounds OK. It goes like this:

"Mira para acá! y para allí y para allá." It is supposed to mean 'Looky here! and over there and over there."

( I've noticed that when the first part is spoken, it sounds like "mira pa cá". )

Hi, I would say " Mira pa' ca! Mira pa' ya! Y pa' ya!"

I know it looks funny but if you say it with "style" or a"rhythm" then it's 'a'ight'!

Hope that helps!!

[Dabeed]

it's 'a'ight'!

Thanks!