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Old 03-09-2008, 08:58 PM   #1
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Hey guys,

As part of one of my class exercises, we had to describe a sequence of events coming from one of our spanish lesson videos.

Just wondering if there are errors and were they are in my text. Also does everything makes sense, the way its written?

Here is my text:

Unidad 3

Juan Cerrano sigue del aeropuerto con una mujer encontrada en el avión. El cónyuge de la mujer la espera en su coche blanco. La mujer presente Juan Cerrano a su cónyuge que parece feliz de verlo. El cónyuge toma los equipajes de la mujer y los dos dejan el aeropuerto. Juan Cerrano observa que la mujer con quien a viajada toma su maleta. Juan Cerrano tiene en su posesión una tarjeta que indica el hostal donde esta la mujer. Juan Cerrano toma nota de la dirección y demanda un taxi. Pide al conductor que conducirlo al hostal. En camino al hostal, cruzan el coche de la mujer que entra dentro una lava-auto. Después salir de la lava-auto, la señora y su cónyuge están arrestados. El policía pide la licencia de conductor del hombre pero esto esta mojado porque pasa en la lava-auto. El cónyuge de la mujer da a los policías los papeles. Durante este tiempo el taxi de Juan llega al lado del coche de la mujer y Juan intenta de hablar con la mujer. La mujer no parece comprender lo que Juan intenta decir. El taxi de Juan debe circular porque hay muchos coches detrás del taxi que esperan. Llegado al hostal, Juan recupera su maleta. La pareja se excusa para tomar su maleta y Juan agradece. Juan esta contento y deja el hostal.


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Old 03-12-2008, 10:53 AM   #2
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I'm afraid you need edition services.

Any translation agency offers edition services at low prices, it's much cheaper than translation.

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