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gguiher · 11-20-2007, 07:22 PM

I have a graded homework assignment due I need a proofread on some sentences that i wrote. Please revise in the most simple way possible.

thanks

7. Yo salgo mi casa por la escuela y yo trabajo en la cafeteria.

8. Yo trabajo con Charlie, Walter, Roger y los mujeres muchos.

9. Nosotros hacemos la comida mucho por los estudiantes mil o mas.

10. Despu�s yo trabajo yo regreso la casa.

11. Yo me quito la ropa de trabajo y yo pongo en el piso.

12. Yo entro en el ba�o y ducho.

13. Yo lavo el cuerpo con el jabon de neutrogena.

Hebe · 11-21-2007, 07:51 AM

Hi gguiher, I suggest making the changes below.

Good luck

7. Salgo de mi casa para la escuela y trabajo en la cafeter�a.

8. Trabajo con Charlie, Walter, Roger y muchas chicas.

9. Preparamos comida para mas de mil estudiantes.

10. Despu�s del trabajo regreso a casa.

11. me quito la ropa de trabajar y descanso en el piso.

12. entro al ba�o y tomo una ducha

13. Me ba�o con jab�n de neutrogena.

lylek · 11-21-2007, 11:13 PM

Hello,

I just wanted to point out that number 8 could also be, depending upon the context:

"Trabajo mucho con..." etc.

If you're indeed saying that you work with many women, I agree with the translation / revision above! However, if you're emphasizing that you work often or a lot, and it happens to be alongside women, then I'd go with the second.

Hope this was helpful and keep up the good work!

Un saludo

ScottJ · 11-26-2007, 05:22 AM

I initially read number 11 as you take the clothes off and put them on the floor, which would read "Me quito la ropa de trabajo y LA pongo en el piso."

11-20-2007, 07:22 PM	#1
gguiher New Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 2 Rep Power: 0	Homework help 2 I have a graded homework assignment due I need a proofread on some sentences that i wrote. Please revise in the most simple way possible. thanks 7. Yo salgo mi casa por la escuela y yo trabajo en la cafeteria. 8. Yo trabajo con Charlie, Walter, Roger y los mujeres muchos. 9. Nosotros hacemos la comida mucho por los estudiantes mil o mas. 10. Despu�s yo trabajo yo regreso la casa. 11. Yo me quito la ropa de trabajo y yo pongo en el piso. 12. Yo entro en el ba�o y ducho. 13. Yo lavo el cuerpo con el jabon de neutrogena.

11-21-2007, 07:51 AM	#2
Hebe Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Caracas- Venezuela Posts: 816 Rep Power: 1441	Hi gguiher, I suggest making the changes below. Good luck 7. Salgo de mi casa para la escuela y trabajo en la cafeter�a. 8. Trabajo con Charlie, Walter, Roger y muchas chicas. 9. Preparamos comida para mas de mil estudiantes. 10. Despu�s del trabajo regreso a casa. 11. me quito la ropa de trabajar y descanso en el piso. 12. entro al ba�o y tomo una ducha 13. Me ba�o con jab�n de neutrogena. __________________ Hebe ♥ ♫ "*To him whose elastic and vigorous thought keeps pace with the sun, the day is a perpetual morning". Henry David Thrreau"* <O</O <O</O

11-21-2007, 11:13 PM	#3
lylek Forum User Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Ithaca, NY Posts: 45 Rep Power: 28	# 8 Hello, I just wanted to point out that number 8 could also be, depending upon the context: "Trabajo mucho con..." etc. If you're indeed saying that you work with many women, I agree with the translation / revision above! However, if you're emphasizing that you work often or a lot, and it happens to be alongside women, then I'd go with the second. Hope this was helpful and keep up the good work! Un saludo

11-26-2007, 05:22 AM	#4
ScottJ Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 271 Rep Power: 354	Watch out on No. 11 I initially read number 11 as you take the clothes off and put them on the floor, which would read "Me quito la ropa de trabajo y LA pongo en el piso."

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