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    I am writing about the description of some hotels in Mexico, and I do not really know if this gramatical structure is correct. This is the content:

    "Indulge in a romantic experience and a personalized service at this luxurious seafront resort for adults only located in/within PlayaParaíso, in RivieraMaya".

    Thanks in advance

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sandybell Esponja Medrano View Post
    I am writing about the description of some hotels in Mexico, and I do not really know if this gramatical structure is correct. This is the content:

    "Indulge in a romantic experience and a personalized service at this luxurious seafront resort for adults only located in/within PlayaParaíso, in RivieraMaya".

    Thanks in advance
    How about ....?


    Indulge in a romantic experience and receive personalized service at this adult-only luxurious seafront resort located in Playa Paraíso in the Riviera Maya

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    I agree with CaliforniaMan's suggestion. Located within is commonly used to refer to a distance e.g. "With an elegant Victorian conversion the Corona Hotel is home to all the requirements of a modern hotel, including electronic locks, data and modem points. Centrally located within walking distance of Buckingham Palace and Victoria train station, make the Hotel an ideal base from which to enjoy all that London has to offer."

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    I agree.


    " Indulge in a romantic experience and receive personalized service at this adult-only luxurious seafront resort located in Playa Paraíso in the Riviera Maya"

    I might revise this a little. I like "luxurious, adults-only..."

    and ... either

    1. "...located in Playa Paraiso in Riviera Maya."

    or

    2. "...located in Playa Paraiso on the Riviera Maya."
    Last edited by vicente; 12-03-2014 at 04:01 PM.
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