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Buenas,

Te comento varias cosas que desde mi punto de vista deben modificarse urgentemente:

1. No es necesario el sujeto en la oración inicial.
2. "Estamos comprometidos" suena bastante inglés.
3. Altamente - casi es anglicismo.

Saludos,

Utgi