which one is better for my cv?? Thank you in advance.

Hello all, i am currently appliying for a job and writting my presentation. Well, the problem is that i have a sentence, that i don't really know how works better.

I you could help me i would really appreciate it. Not only that, i would also contribute to this forum (but in the spanish language).


I hope to have to opportunity to be part of your workgroup.

I hope to have the opportunity of become part of your workgroup.

I hope to have the opportunity to be part of your workgroup.

Maybe are all them good, but which one souds better?

I hope to have to opportunity to be part of your workgroup. X

I hope to have the opportunity of becomeing part of your workgroup.

I hope to have the opportunity to be part of your workgroup.

The third one, I can't fully understand it.. Let wait for a native speaker to show up..

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Originally Posted by matiasc

I hope to have to opportunity to be part of your workgroup. X

I hope to have the opportunity of becomeing part of your workgroup.

I hope to have the opportunity to be part of your workgroup.

The third one, I can't fully understand it.. Let wait for a native speaker to show up..

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thank you!

Hi armandoyaa, welcome to the forum. Where are you from? What languages do you speak?
I agree with matiasc, but if the context allows so, you could try:

I am looking forward to becoming part of your workgroup

:)

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Originally Posted by nabylm

Hi armandoyaa, welcome to the forum. Where are you from? What languages do you speak?
I agree with matiasc, but if the context allows so, you could try:

I am looking forward to becoming part of your workgroup

:)

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Hello nabylm!

I'm from Barcelona, i natively speak catalan and spanish and a little bit of portugues and italian (are so similar with the catalan and spanish, not a big deal). I've studied english in an academy for many years. My speaking english is not bad (i would say that is high compared with the spanish average), i can mantain a decent conversation with anyone speaking english about anything. My biggest problem is that sometimes i get stuck with some sentences and i make some mistakes. Even tough, i keep studiying it, so luckily someday i'll become as good as you :)

The funniest part is that while i was small i got obligated to study all this languages, and i really hated that. I was by far the worst in my class with the english. But the life takes many turns, and when i was a teenager i rediscovered the english, while my classmates didn't and got stuck with the same level. And nowadays my english level is in that moment when i feel that i am really improving my vocabulary, the pronounciation, the writting. I am quite optimistic. I just ReRediscovered english again.


Thank you and i hope that this message works as a presentation!

Entonces Benvingut! Indeed, very unusual path you followed.... pero mejor tarde que nunca;), y como siempre, cuando algo te gusta, le pones más ganas. What kind of studies did you do?