+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 6 of 6

Thread: which one is better for my cv?? Thank you in advance.

 
  1. #1
    New Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2017
    Age
    26
    Posts
    3
    Rep Power
    0

    Default which one is better for my cv?? Thank you in advance.

    Hello all, i am currently appliying for a job and writting my presentation. Well, the problem is that i have a sentence, that i don't really know how works better.

    I you could help me i would really appreciate it. Not only that, i would also contribute to this forum (but in the spanish language).


    I hope to have to opportunity to be part of your workgroup.

    I hope to have the opportunity of become part of your workgroup.

    I hope to have the opportunity to be part of your workgroup.

    Maybe are all them good, but which one souds better?

  2. #2
    Senior Member matiasc's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2016
    Location
    Buenos Aires, Argentina
    Age
    26
    Posts
    264
    Rep Power
    673

    Default Re: which one is better for my cv?? Thank you in advance.

    I hope to have to opportunity to be part of your workgroup. X

    I hope to have the opportunity of becomeing part of your workgroup.

    I hope to have the opportunity to be part of your workgroup.

    The third one, I can't fully understand it.. Let wait for a native speaker to show up..
    /MatiasC
    C:/DOS
    C:/DOS/RUN
    RUN/DOS/RUN



  3. #3
    New Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2017
    Age
    26
    Posts
    3
    Rep Power
    0

    Default Re: which one is better for my cv?? Thank you in advance.

    Quote Originally Posted by matiasc View Post
    I hope to have to opportunity to be part of your workgroup. X

    I hope to have the opportunity of becomeing part of your workgroup.

    I hope to have the opportunity to be part of your workgroup.

    The third one, I can't fully understand it.. Let wait for a native speaker to show up..
    thank you!

  4. #4
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2016
    Posts
    356
    Rep Power
    230

    Default Re: which one is better for my cv?? Thank you in advance.

    Hi armandoyaa, welcome to the forum. Where are you from? What languages do you speak?
    I agree with matiasc, but if the context allows so, you could try:

    I am looking forward to becoming part of your workgroup


  5. #5
    New Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2017
    Age
    26
    Posts
    3
    Rep Power
    0

    Default Re: which one is better for my cv?? Thank you in advance.

    Quote Originally Posted by nabylm View Post
    Hi armandoyaa, welcome to the forum. Where are you from? What languages do you speak?
    I agree with matiasc, but if the context allows so, you could try:

    I am looking forward to becoming part of your workgroup

    Hello nabylm!

    I'm from Barcelona, i natively speak catalan and spanish and a little bit of portugues and italian (are so similar with the catalan and spanish, not a big deal). I've studied english in an academy for many years. My speaking english is not bad (i would say that is high compared with the spanish average), i can mantain a decent conversation with anyone speaking english about anything. My biggest problem is that sometimes i get stuck with some sentences and i make some mistakes. Even tough, i keep studiying it, so luckily someday i'll become as good as you

    The funniest part is that while i was small i got obligated to study all this languages, and i really hated that. I was by far the worst in my class with the english. But the life takes many turns, and when i was a teenager i rediscovered the english, while my classmates didn't and got stuck with the same level. And nowadays my english level is in that moment when i feel that i am really improving my vocabulary, the pronounciation, the writting. I am quite optimistic. I just ReRediscovered english again.


    Thank you and i hope that this message works as a presentation!

  6. #6
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2016
    Posts
    356
    Rep Power
    230

    Default Re: which one is better for my cv?? Thank you in advance.

    Entonces Benvingut! Indeed, very unusual path you followed.... pero mejor tarde que nunca, y como siempre, cuando algo te gusta, le pones más ganas. What kind of studies did you do?

+ Reply to Thread

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •