Is this correct translation

hola, ¿quiere el pelo muy limpio? ¿Quieres más rápido? este es el producto para usted. El champú especial, para que ahora

Hello, do you want clean hair? do you want it fast? then this is the product for you! the special shampoo! order now!

suppose to be making a commercial and using present preteraite -- i need 2 can someone help me? :X im bad at spanish

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Hola : ¿Quieres que tu pelo brille de limpio? Lo quieres rápido? Entonces elige este producto/entonces este es el producto para ti. El champú especial....

To whom will this be directed? Younger people? Use :tú.

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Originally Posted by exxcéntrica

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Hola : ¿Quieres que tu pelo brille de limpio? Lo quieres rápido? Entonces elige este producto/entonces este es el producto para ti. El champú especial! Ordenelo ya!

To whom will this be directed? Younger people? Use :tú.

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hola Exx,
solo le añaridia eso....

Hi there!
Just one thing. In this context, I would´t translate "order" as "ordenar". The right translation for me would be "¡pídelo ya!".
Hope it helps

Here we would not say

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! Ordénelo ya!

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either. We would go for:

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"¡pídelo ya!".

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But I am sure there are countries in which Order as in Orden is used.
Ordenar here is more used in the Army, or when giving orders in general, a command!
An example of when we would use Order/Orden here would be at the restaurant. May I take your oder? Puedo tomarles la orden? But still, it is a lot more common "el pedido".

From what I see on the infomercials on TV, either one works.
I've seen some say "pidalo ya" and I've seen some say "ordenelo ya".
So there, I don't know left from right! :D
But that's just me :p
Dragona:rolleyes:

So other then the order thing, its all correct? and btw its to usted, thanks for help! :)!