Apreciare mucho su ayuda

Mi nombre es Paul Briceno y acabo de terminar una pagina web, es acerca de un tutorial para personas que estan interesadas a hablar español. La ayuda que necesito es que me revisen y corrigan el contenido de la primera pagina que esta en ingles, con lo que se refiere a gramatica y quizas oraciones que no hagan sentido, aqui les dejo lo que escribi y muchas gracias de antemano.

Why the Spanish to English translation Google tool it is becoming very popular these days, well I would say there is two major reasons for that, first one is the accuracy to translate of this tool, I think it is more effective than the others translators around that cost you money to try, the second reason, it is FREE, yes 100% FREE and this one is the favorite for many people.
My name is Paul Briceno and I am a native Spanish speaker. I would like to share with you the tips and techniques that I used to learn English.
First I'll like to talk about translators, they may perhaps be the favorite tool that can people use to make things easier but they are not really helpful if you are trying to learn a new language, I am not against them to the contrary I think that those are great tools and we can take advantage of those but wisely specially if they are FREE, like the one I'd mention above from Google.
I am saying that translators are not helpful if we are trying to learn a new language, simply because we let the translator to do all the work for us and this way we will not learn that really much, I think the best way to use a translator if we decided to use it as a tool to learn a new language, is as a dictionary.
Another thing and I believe did help me to learned English as a second language faster, it was actually not translating nothing or anything at all, simply thinking in the language, identifying items by just looking at it, do not try to translate in your brain what is the item name it, for example if you see a table just make sure that is not a table but is a "mesa" it may sound difficult to do it but with practice you can master anything.
Watching television, listening to radio stations, reading books even if you do not understand some words (use a translator here) in the language you want to learn. Doing those things frequently, will definably help your understanding to identify actions and items.
Learning your new language from someone that speaks native it is very helpful for your accent.
If you want to learn Spanish, I can help you if you are committed to do so, and just to let you know, I am not trying to sell any course here, this is just my contribution to the community since that this great country open their doors for me to achieve my goals in life.
The way that I am going to share this with you is by challenge you for the next 30 days and is not that I want to demonstrate you that those techniques works but it is that you will demonstrate to yourself that you can master anything with only practice.
To get results you must need to watch the videos and read the lessons out loud every day for the next 30 days, even if you do not understand what you are saying at the beginning.
If you want to make any comments to improve this program or perhaps need some help, please feel free to speak up your mind but I will not tolerate any spammers, by the way this is a "no follow" link site.
Well without anything else to say at this moment, let's begin this journey and have fun with it! Thank you for visited my site.

Hola Paul,
Good luck with your web page; you are doing a great thing for the community. Below are some general corrections which were made without trying to influence your style.
Saludos y muy buena suerte con su página.

Why is Google's Spanish to English translation tool becoming very popular these days? Well, I would say there are two major reasons for this; first is this tool's accuracy in translating. I think it is more effective than others translators around that cost you money to try. The second reason is that it is FREE, yes 100% FREE, which is many people's favorite reason.
My name is Paul Briceno and I am a native Spanish speaker. I would like to share with you the tips and techniques that I used to learn English.
First, I'll like to talk about translators. Perhaps they are people´s favorite tool to use to make things easier, but they are not really helpful if you are trying to learn a new language. I am not against them; on the contrary I think that they are great tools and we can take advantage of them especially if they are FREE, like the one I mentioned above from Google.
I am saying that translators are not helpful if we are trying to learn a new language, simply because we let the translator to do all the work for us and this way we will not really learn that much. I think the best way to use a translator, if we decide to use it, is as a dictionary.
Another thing which I believe did help me to learn English as a second language faster, was actually not translating anything at all, but simply thinking in the language and identifying items by just looking at them, without trying to translate in my brain the name of the item. For example if you see a table, don't think of it as a "table" but rather a "mesa". It may sound difficult to do it but with practice you can master anything.
Watch television, listen to radio stations, and read books, even if you do not understand some words (use a translator here in the language you want to learn). Doing those things frequently will definitely help your understanding to identify actions and items.
Learning your new language from a native speaker is very helpful for your accent.
If you want to learn Spanish, I can help you if you are committed to do so, and just to let you know, I am not trying to sell any course here; this is just my contribution to the community since this great country opened her doors for me to achieve my goals in life.
The way that I am going to share this with you is to challenge you for the next 30 days. It is not that I want to demonstrate to you that these techniques work, but that you will demonstrate to yourself that you can master anything with enough practice.
To get results you need to watch the videos and read the lessons out loud every day for the next 30 days, even if you do not understand what you are saying at the beginning.
If you want to make any comments to improve this program or perhaps need some help, please feel free to speak your mind, but I will not tolerate any spammers. By the way, this is a "no follow" link site.
Well, without anything more to say at this moment, let's begin this journey and have fun with it! Thank you for visiting my site.

Muchisimas gracias Christina, en realidad aprecio su ayuda.

No hay de qué, Paul. Quizá me pueda ayudar con el español! :-)

Definitivamente que lo hare, porsupuesto hasta lo que se, Gracias.

Hola Paul:

Solamente quise hacer unos pequeños cambios (sobretodo de puntuación) basándome en el texto de Christina para darle mayor 'armonía' y fluidez al momento de leerlo. Espero que alguien más venga a darle otra "pulidita" para que te quede super.

Saludos... Xóchitl

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Why is Google's Spanish to English translation tool becoming very popular these days? Well, I would say there are two major reasons for this; first, is this tool's accuracy in translating. I think it is more effective than other translators around that cost you money to try. The second reason is that it is FREE; yes, 100% FREE!! Which is many people's favorite reason.
My name is Paul Briceno and I am a native Spanish speaker. I would like to share with you the tips and techniques that I used to learn English.
First, I'll like to talk about translators. Perhaps they are people´s favorite tool to use to make things easier, but they are not really helpful if you are trying to learn a new language. I am not against them; on the contrary, I think that they are great tools to take advantage of; especially if they are FREE -like the one I mentioned above from Google.
I am saying that translators are not helpful if we are trying to learn a new language, simply because we let the translator to do all the work for us, and by doing so, we will not really learn that much. I think the best way to use a translator -if we decide to use it- is as a dictionary.
Another thing, which I believe did help me to learn English as a second language faster, was actually not translating anything at all, but simply thinking in the language and identifying items by just looking at them without trying to translate in my brain the name of such item. For example, if you see a table, don't think of it as a "table" but rather a "mesa". It may sound difficult to do at first but with practice you can master anything.
Watch television, listen to radio stations, and read books even if you do not understand some words. (Use a translator here in the language you want to learn.) Doing those things frequently will definitely help you to identify actions and items.
Learning your new language from a native speaker is very helpful for your accent.
If you want to learn Spanish I can help you, but ONLY if you are committed to do so. And just to let you know, I am not trying to sell any course here; this is my contribution to the community since this great country opened its doors for me to achieve my goals in life.
To start, I am going to challenge you for the next 30 days. It is not that I want to demonstrate to you that these techniques work, but that you will demonstrate to yourself that you can master anything with enough practice.
To get results you need to watch the videos and read the lessons out loud every day for the next 30 days -even if you do not understand what you are saying.
If you want to make any comments to improve this program or perhaps need some help, please feel free to speak your mind, but I will not tolerate any spammers. By the way, this is a "no follow" link site.
Well, without anything more to say at this moment, let's begin this journey and have fun with it! Thank you for visiting my site.

Gracias Xochitl L. Eres muy amable agradeco tu ayuda. Mi apellido es Briceño pero despues de haber vivido algun tiempo en Estados Unidos me acostumbre a Briceno e incluso cuando me dieron mi certificado de naturalizacion para ser ciudadano estadounidense, por la costumbre hize que me pusieran Briceno, pero siempre lo pronuncio como Briceño. Gracias otra vez !

Hola Paul

Te deseo mucha suerte con tu programa y tu página Web.

A continuación mi versión:

Why is Google's Spanish to English translation tool becoming so popular these days?

Well, I would say there are two major reasons for this: one is the accuracy of translation this tool provides --I think it is more effective than other translators around that cost you money; the other is that it is FREE; yes, 100% FREE! Which is many people's favorite reason.

My name is Paul Briceno and I am a native Spanish speaker. I would like to share with you the tips and techniques that I used to learn English.

First of all, I'd like to talk about translators. They are perhaps most people´s favorite tool to use to make things easier; however, they are not really helpful when you are trying to learn a new language. I am not against them; on the contrary, I think that they are great tools that we can all benefit from --especially if they are FREE like the one from Google that I mentioned above. But in my opinion, translators are not helpful if we are trying to learn a new language, simply because we let the translator do all the work for us, and as a result, we do not learn as much. I think the best way to use a translator --if we decide to do so-- is to use it only as a dictionary.

Another aspect that I believe helped me to learn English faster, was actually not translating anything at all, but instead thinking in English and identifying items just by looking at them without trying to translate the items' names in my mind. For example, if you see a table, don't think of it as a "table" but rather as a "mesa". It may sound difficult at first, but with practice you can master anything. Watch television, listen to radio stations, and read books even if you do not understand some words in the language you want to learn (you can always use a translator in these situations). Doing all these things frequently will definitely help you to identify actions and items.

Learning the new language from a native speaker is very helpful for your accent. If you want to learn Spanish, I can help you providing you are committed to do so. I am not trying to sell any course here. This is my contribution to the community since this great country opened its doors for me to achieve my goals in life.

The way that I am going to share this with you is by challenging you for the next 30 days. Not because I want to prove to you that these techniques really work, but for you to see for yourself that you can master anything only by practicing. To get results, you need to watch the videos and read the lessons out loud every day for the next 30 days --even if at the begining you do not understand what you are saying.

If you want to make any comments to improve this program or if you need some help, please feel free to speak your mind, but I will not tolerate any spammers. By the way, this is a "no follow" link site.

Well, without any further ado, let's begin this journey and have fun with it! Thank you for visiting my site.

Saludos :)

Paul,
I would go with Cotty's version. It is the most polished! :-)
Saludos

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Originally Posted by Christina

Paul,
I would go with Cotty's version. It is the most polished! :-)
Saludos

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Opino lo mismo...

Xóchitl

Han sido todos ustedes muy gentiles de su parte, al desearme todo lo mejor y queria agradecerles el haberse tomado el tiempo para revisar y corregir lo escrito. Gracias Christina,Gracias Xochitl y porsupuesto Cotty.