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    Default los derechos que le asisten como perjudicado, ofendido ó víctima de un delito

    Hola a todos!

    Necesito ayuda con la frase arriba que se encuentra en un informe de policia que estoy traduciendo.

    La frase entrera es:

    cuyos demás datos constan en su declaración de los derechos que le asisten como perjudicado, ofendido ó víctima de un delito.

    Y yo he puesto:

    whose additional details appear in her statement of rights that support her as harmed, offended or victim
    of a crime.

    No me suena muy bien en inglés así que os agradezco cualquier ayuda!

    Gracias!!

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    (...) whose information appears in detail in her statement of rights, which she has as the injured, offended or victim party of a crime.

    I heartily recommend you to wait for a native's comment.

    Good luck!
    Last edited by clarab; 09-28-2010 at 01:52 PM.

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    Default Re: los derechos que le asisten como perjudicado, ofendido ó víctima de un delito

    cuyos demás datos constan en su declaración de los derechos que le asisten como perjudicado, ofendido ó víctima de un delito.

    Hola Clara!

    As I understand this, her statement of rights contains details of the crime committed against her and therefore support her as a victim of a crime. Do you agree?


    If so, I would suggest:

    (...) whose additional information appears in her statement of rights, in support of her (position) as the injured or offended party, or victim of a crime.
    Last edited by vicente; 09-28-2010 at 01:59 PM.
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    Default Re: los derechos que le asisten como perjudicado, ofendido ó víctima de un delito

    I like your version! It sounds perfect to me.

    Thanks!

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