vainoo

Hey i need your help with a translation..


Quiero ser en tu vida algo mas que un instante,algo mas que una sombra y algo mas que un afan, quiero ser en ti mismo una huella imborrable y un recuerdo constante .Quiero ser en tu vida una pena de ausencia, un dolor de distancia y una eterna amistad.Algo mas que una imagen que venciendo caminos,llega, pasa y se va" ... espero que asi sea. por que al menos eso es lo que tu has sido para mi...

thats it!
Thanking you in advance!

Hebe

Dificil traducir algo tan romántico y poético pero aquí va mi intento

Saludos

"I would like to be in your life something more that just a moment, more than just a shadow. I want to be yearning, a non-vanishing trace and a steadfast memory. I want to be in your life sorrow induced by absence, pain created by distance and an everlasting friendship. I want to mean more than an image that arrives overcoming obstacles, passes you by and then is gone. I hope I mean that much to you because that is exactly what you mean to me.

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SandraT

Hebe, your translation is quite romantic for sure. I would like to make a few changes but just for the sake of doing it. this is something I enjoy!

To you, I want to be more than just an instant, more than a shadow and more than a will. I want to be an indelible trace and a constant memory. To your life, I want to be pain induced by absence, increased by distance and yet eternal friendship. I want to be more than an image that arrives overcoming obstacles, faces you and then is gone. I hope I mean that much to you cause at least, that is what you have meant to me.

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Hebe

Great version Sandy !!! quite romantic too.. You must be either in love with someone or in love with love itself (jeje)

Best regards

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SandraT

Oh my friend, I just love poetry! I wish I had been born in Shakespeare's age! Silly as it may sound but I would have loved to be near him... hahaha!!!

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vainoo

oh jesus!! thanks a lot for your help!!! mmm i dont know now how to reply to her!! Im speechless!!!

Hebe

Love is a universal language. Just respond with words that come straight from the heart.

Good luck !!!!

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Hebe

It' does not sound not silly at all Sandy. In fact I belive that You can make your dreams come true .. Take Shakespeare all for yourself BUT PLEASE LEAVE ROMEO TO ME (JEJE)

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SandraT

No problem, I am not interested in the man, just in the soul and mind...ha hahahaha!!!
And vaino, just do what Hebe has advised. show your feelings!

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Hebe

I was just kidding Sandy. You are entitled to your own Romeo

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