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    Hi, Im Joe from Argentina. Im a web-designer, a translator too, I can translate from english into spanish very well, but the obvious problem is to do the opposite, so i need assistance here.

    This text is the english version of a web site im building. What i need is simple: an english speaking person to read it and correct it. mistakes? suggestions? PLEASE!

    I can offer to do the opposite any time you want. My spanish is almost perfect so you can send me any doubts, texts, whatever in a private message and i'll do my best.

    Well here's the text, and thanks in advance!

    ------------------------------------------------------------------

    This website was Flash designed and includes high quality pictures and images. Depending on your internet connection, it may take a few seconds to load. Sorry for the inconvenience.
    % Loaded /// ??KB of 1894KB
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    HOME
    WHO WE ARE
    PACKAGES
    PICTURES AND V*DEOS
    CONTACT US
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    WHO WE ARE
    Our services cover different packages where the aesthetic procedure or surgical treatment you look for is combined with a pleasant relax trip. Plane tickets, reception and transportation (???), mini-tours, first class lodging, are some of the items we add to the aesthetic procedure and the must-have individual and group psycotheraphy neccesary to decrease fears and anxiety, and which will help you find your new and better appearance.

    treatments and procedures: mammary procedures / laser rejuvenation and ph0torejuvenation / face procedures / nose procedures / eyelids and eyebrows procedures / body silhouette / legs and arms / genital area procedures / reconstructive surgery, congenital anomalies and disorders/ LASER: skin injuries, spots, tatoos elimination
    MORE INFO

    Dr *****
    Director of Professionals Team
    Profession: Doctor
    Speciality: plastic aesthetic and reconstructive surgery
    Dra *****
    Profession: psychologist

    Because every body change means a psychic re-arrangement; because the desire of recovering our beauty and youth can be difficulted by fears and prejudice, C* E* T* has the psychologic team to deal with before, during, and after the medical intervention that will make your dreams come true. Psych0therapy and Support starts in a virtual way before the patient arrives, and is optional during the post-operation. We have an only goal: diminish your fears and anxiety.
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    PACKAGES

    PERSONALIZED PACKAGES
    Every client is unique, thats why we try to reach full satisfaction in each case, adapting our packages for every one. It's YOU who decides where to stay (h0tels, private appartments, hostels), it's YOU who will chose your tourism and recreation activities, from a huge bunch of options we will provide.
    CHOSE YOUR OWN ACTIVITIES
    Among all the items we offer, you can feel fr3e to chose the ones you like and organize your own package: -plane tickets -reception and transportation -lodging -aesthetic surgery -psycotheraphy before, during and after the treatment
    CONTACT US
    ------------------------------------------------
    PICTURES & V*DEOS
    WHO WE ARE
    ROSARIO
    LODGINGS
    PROCEDURES
    BUENOS AIRES
    VIDE*S
    ZOOM IN
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    CONTACT US
    Fill in the following form to send us your message
    name
    email
    message
    reset send

    THAT WOULD BE ALL. Just a quick reading and PLEASE any corrections you like. I need it to be clear and "not translated, pure"



    Thanks in advance to any who can help me!

    Joe

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    WHO WE ARE

    Our services include different packages combining the cosmetic procedure or surgical treatment you seek with a pleasant, relaxing vacation. Plane tickets, reception, transportation, mini-tours, and first class lodging are some of the items we add, as well as individual and group sessions used to decrease fears and anxiety. The latter is also useful to help you adjust to your new and more youthful appearance.

    Treatments and procedures include: mammary procedures, laser and photo rejuvenation, face procedures, nose procedures, eyelid and eyebrow procedures, body silhouette, legs and arms, genital area procedures, reconstructive surgery, congenital anomalies and disorders. Laser procedures include: treatment for skin injuries, spots, and tattoo removal.

    MORE INFO

    Dr. *****
    Director of Professionals Team
    Profession: Medical Doctor
    Speciality: plastic, aesthetic, and reconstructive surgery

    Dr. ***** (Siquiera si sería Dra. en español)
    Profession: Psychologist

    Because every body change results in a mental adjustment, and because the desire of recovering our beauty and youth can be hindered by fears and prejudice, C* E* T* has a psychology team to work with you before, during, and after the medical intervention to make your dreams come true. Psychotherapy and support starts in a virtual way before the patient arrives and is optional after the procedure. The primary goal is to diminish your fears and anxiety.
    ------------------------------------------------
    PACKAGES

    PERSONALIZED PACKAGES
    Every client is unique. That’ s why we try to achieve full satisfaction in each case, adapting our packages for every one. It is YOU who decides where to stay (hotels, private apartments, or hostels), it is YOU who will select your tourism and recreation activities from a wide array of options.


    CHOOSE YOUR OWN ACTIVITIES
    Among the items we offer, you may feel free to choose the ones you like and organize your own package: -plane tickets -reception and transportation -lodging -aesthetic surgery -psychotherapy before, during and after the treatment

    CONTACT US
    ------------------------------------------------
    PICTURES & V*DEOS
    WHO WE ARE
    ROSARIO
    LODGINGS
    PROCEDURES
    BUENOS AIRES
    VIDE*S
    ZOOM IN
    -----------------------------------------------
    CONTACT US
    Fill in the following form to send us your message
    name
    email
    message
    reset send

    Estoy listo ahorita - ¿donde firmo?
    Last edited by gernt; 10-31-2009 at 03:04 PM.

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    WOWWWWWW!!!!

    Incredible! YOU DESERVE A MILLION THANKS! I owe you 2500 pizzas if you come to argentina sometime :P

    Anything, anytime I can help, just ask!

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