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    Default Ayuda urgente!!

    Hola, necesito ayuda con la traducción de un texto urgente.
    Si alguien me puede ayudar.

    El texto:
    Muy buenas noches, damas y caballeros.
    La noche se viste de gala, de luces y colorido.
    Nos complace en presentarles un espectaculo en el que se hara muestra del arte y de la maestria de la alta escuela.
    El centro hipico de alcala se enorgullece de que formen parte de este mundo tan fantastico y tan nuestro.
    Esperamos que disfruten esta noche dedicada a todos ustedes.
    Que comience el espectaculo.

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    Good Evening Ladies and Gentlemen:


    And this evening is very well dressed in lights and colors. It pleases us to present you a special in which we will show you some of the artistry and mastery of the (our?) high school. The equestrian center of Alcala is proud to be a part of this fantastic world of ours. We hope that you enjoy this, a night dedicated to all of you.

    Let the spectacle begin.
    Last edited by gernt; 04-23-2009 at 02:08 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by gernt
    Good Evening Ladies and Gentlemen:


    And this evening is very well dressed in lights and colors. It pleases us to present you a special in which we will show you some of the artistry and mastery of the (our?) high school. The equestrian center of Alcala is proud to be a part of this fantastic world of ours. We hope that you enjoy this, a night dedicated to all of you.

    Let the spectacle begin.
    No sería mejor : We are pleased to present you... ?? A ver...

    Cuidado que high school es como colegio o secundario.
    Raul, que queres decir por alta escuela ? Is it more like prestigious/important/notarious school ? En este sentido, hablas de alta escuela ?
    Gracias por guiarnos...

    Saludos

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    Default Re: Ayuda urgente!!

    I agree with Kainu's suggestions :-)

    I would only change the final line, simply to:

    Let the show begin

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    Quote Originally Posted by mvictoria
    I agree with Kainu's suggestions :-)

    I would only change the final line, simply to:

    Let the show begin
    Si esa la ví despues.
    It sounds much more fluent and native like that

    Thx

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    Good evening ladies and gentleman:

    The evening is dressed up with its best clothes, lights and bright colours. We are pleased to present a special in which it will be shown an exhibition of art and skills of the training school.
    The equestrian center of Alcalá is proud of you to be part of such a fantastic world of ours.
    We hope that you enjoy this evening, dedicated to all of you.
    Let the show begin!

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    Quote Originally Posted by coolguava
    Good evening ladies and gentleman:

    The evening is dressed up with its best clothes, lights and bright colours. We are pleased to present a special in which it will be shown an exhibition of art and skills of the training school.
    The equestrian center of Alcalá is proud of you to be part of such a fantastic world of ours.
    We hope that you enjoy this evening, dedicated to all of you.
    Let the show begin!
    Disculpe, pero por favor no agreguen errores :
    gentleman --> gentlemen

    Por el resto, diría que un nativo nos quitará todas las dudas...

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    Default Re: Ayuda urgente!!

    I would only remove a word or two - and, if this is for the Americas, the "u" from colour. Sounds good to me except for the "such a".


    The evening is dressed up with its best clothes, lights and bright colors. We are pleased to present a special in which will be shown an exhibition of art and skills of the training school.
    The equestrian center of Alcalá is proud to be part of this fantastic world of ours.
    We hope that you enjoy this evening, dedicated to all of you.
    Let the show begin!

    (For that last line, it is also common to say "On with the show!" which is also the title of an old movie.)
    Last edited by gernt; 04-24-2009 at 10:17 AM.

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    Jajaja lo siento, se me paso lo de gentlemen... Gracias por las correciones!!

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