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    Default Could you help me with another song, please?

    Hi
    I think it's right but I wanna be sure.

    Where are you going with that suitcase?
    I told you last time I saw you there
    I sold the house and moved to other
    it was a depressing jail

    you broke down all the pictures and run away burning
    there was someone waiting at the door
    I was standing at the corner feeding your eyes... so cold

    I'm falling down my Grace
    falling in these days
    I'm falling down my Grace
    I need your spell

    Now I'm bored, no one makes jokes
    no one really listens to me
    crying alone I play this love song
    would you go back there?

    I've tried, I've tried to be a good man
    this morning I awake in madness

    I'm falling down my Grace
    can you hear my prayer?
    I'm falling down my Grace
    I need your skills

    I'm falling down my Grace
    can you hear my prayer?
    I'm falling down my Grace
    Beautiful Grace

    is it really done?
    are you really gone?
    I wanna hear you love

    Thanks

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    Default Re: Could you help me with another song, please?

    Normally, we'd say "you took down all the pictures and ran away burning". But in a song, I'm not sure that is so important, and it might even add meaning the way it is. We use "to break down" to mean someone begins to cry.

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    Default Re: Could you help me with another song, please?

    I guess this is a song in spanish and you are translating it to english so if i had that lil peace of the spanish song i would be able to help you a lil bit more. But so far it sounds great man =p

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