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    Default I need some help with one song, please

    Hi
    Could someone help me, please?
    Is this song right?:

    you lost your fears
    trying hard to be a dogged kid
    on your own
    wolfing down all your pills
    who do you belong to?

    do you wanna see the sunrise with a lemon ice cream?
    memories of childhood break

    the son who is on the run
    falling from the rope

    tell me, why hospitals need a hostage?
    You could run away and forget this madness
    kiss the nurse or rape the doctor, yeah!
    all your know-all friends expect you to fail

    a son's coming alone from a broken home

    a kind of love that kills, somedays
    it comes when your soul needs some help
    day by day it digs your grave
    did you buy any rose to leave there?

    what do you wanna do with this hate of yours?
    someone sells faith to fall in grace
    but innocence is gone, and things are done
    Mr joe, hit the atmosphere

    Mr Joe, please hit the atmosphere
    outside there's a brand new sin
    waiting for you, come
    come Mr Joe

    Thank you very much (is "a lot" rigth?)

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    Default Re: I need some help with one song, please

    What exactly do you need? you translated it yourself? you wrote it?

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    Default Re: I need some help with one song, please

    Quote Originally Posted by kovant
    Hi
    Could someone help me, please?
    Is this song right?
    Dear Kovant I never heard this song, so I have no way of telling whether it is right or not. The lyric is nice though.

    Kind regards


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    Thanks for the answers!!

    The lyric is mine. I think it's right but I wanna be sure about it cos' we are gonna make a record.
    Thanks!!

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    Sounds fine to me.

    "Thank you very much" is more formal. "Thanks a lot" (or just "Thanks") is more common. Both are fine here.

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    Thank you very much!!
    Best regards

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