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    Default (Translation practice) Hantavirus pneumonia: why in some cases it could be deadly

    (I'm practicing translation by translate some random texts from electronic newspapers. I appreciate all the corrections and advice. Thank you)


    Hantavirus pneumonia: why in some cases it could be deadly
    The disease produces in the country more than 100 cases per year and even though the long-tailed colilargo is the principal vector for the virus, the outbreak that develops in the south presented the particularity of person-to-person transmission. In the most serious cases, the lack of oxygenation and the circulatory collapse put in danger the patient life.


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    Default Re: (Translation practice) Hantavirus pneumonia: why in some cases it could be deadly

    Hi, if you want us to correct your translation, you should include the original text.

    I will help you with some grammar mistakes:

    I'm practising translation by translating random texts from online newspapers. I appreciate all the corrections and advice. Thank you)
    Hantavirus pneumonia: why it can be deadly in some cases
    The disease produces more than 100 cases per year and even though the long-tailed colilargo is the principal vector for the virus, the outbreak that develops in the south presented the particularity of person-to-person transmission. In the most serious cases, the lack of oxygenation and the circulatory collapse put in danger the patient life.

    Ok, the last part I think you should have it corrected by someone who understands the subject and is ideally a native English speaker.


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