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    Default Como les comenté en el anterior

    Hola

    El mes que viene me voy a USA a buscar trabajo pero tengo algunos problemas de vocabulario para redactar en inglés y quisiera saber si ustedes pueden ayudarme con las siguiente oración. Gracias.

    Como les comenté en el anterior correo me gustaría mucho poder desarrollar mi trabajo en la elaboración de productos que faciliten la labor de otros departamentos de la empresa así como de entes ajenos pero estoy abierto a nuevas sugerencias que ustedes quieran realizar.

    Mi intento

    As I explained in the previous mail I am really interested in developing my job in the production of products that facilitate the work of other departments of the company as well as of foreign entities but I am opened to new suggestions that you want to realize

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    As I explained in the previous mail I am really interested in developing my job in the production of products that facilitate the work of other departments of the company as well as of foreign entities and I am open to any suggestions that you might want to make

    Remember that "realize" is a "false friend" and does not mean the same in English as it does in Spanish.
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    Default Re: Como les comenté en el anterior

    Quote Originally Posted by PedroAraiz View Post
    Hola

    El mes que viene me voy a USA a buscar trabajo pero tengo algunos problemas de vocabulario para redactar en inglés y quisiera saber si ustedes pueden ayudarme con las siguiente oración. Gracias.

    Como les comenté en el anterior correo me gustaría mucho poder desarrollar mi trabajo en la elaboración de productos que faciliten la labor de otros departamentos de la empresa así como de entes ajenos pero estoy abierto a nuevas sugerencias que ustedes quieran realizar.

    Mi intento

    As I explained in the previous mail I am really interested in developing my job in the production of products that facilitate the work of other departments of the company as well as of foreign entities but I am opened to new suggestions that you want to realize
    Sorry... I don't like the " production of products " part... :-)

    May I suggest something like this?

    As I explained in my previous mail, I would like to work in the making of products that will ease (or facilitate) the work of other departments of the company as well as outside entities. However, I am open to (new?) suggestions you may wish to make.

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    Default Re: Como les comenté en el anterior

    I agree with CaliforniaMan on production of products and on "new" suggestion. It does not collocate with this adjective.

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