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    can u help me with this one:

    when i woke up this morning, a big surprise was waiting me outside...the whole neighbourhood was colored in white...yes...first snow this winter and first snowflakes...i love it..one thing i really like in winter is walking around at night when snowflakes are falling down the sky...i wish you could be here...

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    Default Re: first snow...

    Hi Lili!!

    I just read the paragraph you have problems with... I would like to know what part you need help with... Or is it everything?? Why don't you give it a try, and then we can help you with the rest?? How does that sound??

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    it's everything...well i tried...but i'm a begginer and this is still a bit hard for me...

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    Please give it a try and we'll help you correct it. A good dictionary might help.

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    i will find help elsewhere...thanks anyway...

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