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Old 09-20-2009, 12:24 AM   #1
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Default revision to basic sentences?

In English:
My name is Giselle Levy. My birthday is May 16, 1993. I am 16 years old. I am beautiful, intelligent and short. My favorite class is Spanish. I like dogs and talking with my friends. I want to be an orthodontist. If I had money, I would b.u.y a house.

In Spanish (revisions needed!):
Mi nombre es Giselle Levy. Mi cumpleanos es 16 de Mayo, 1993. Yo tengo diez y seis anos. Yo soy bonita, inteligente, Baja. Mi clase favorita es Espanol. Me gusta los perros y hablar con mis amigos. Yo quiero ser una ortodontista. Si yo tuviera dinero yo c.omprare una casa.

*Bolded and underlined words/phrases need to be corrected.
But, I'm not sure what's wrong with them.

Any help is greatly appreciated!
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Old 09-21-2009, 12:03 PM   #2
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Mi nombre es Giselle Levy. Mi cumpleaños es/nací el 16 de Mayo de 1993 y tengo dieciseis años. Soy bonita, inteligente y de corta estatura. Mi clase favorita es la de español. Me gustan los perros y conversar con mis amigos. Quiero ser ortodoncista. Si tuviera dinero me compraría una casa.
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Old 09-21-2009, 12:23 PM   #3
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Coincido con Gisela en todas las correcciones.

saludos!
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Old 09-21-2009, 02:56 PM   #4
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THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
I MEAN, gracias!

I really appreciate this.
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