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    Question I'm writing about my classroom...

    I need help making sure this makes sense in Spanish:


    !Bienvanido! Este es mi sala de clase. Hay unos pupitres delante de las ventanas, y destr's del escritorio y la puerta. Hay unas tres mapas y un cartel en la pared. La compuatora, el rat'on, y el teclado es en el escritorio. Hay es una mesa delante de la mapa. El reloj la puerta en la pared delante.


    Please point out ANY mistakes, as this is a rough draft for a major grade!!

    Thanks,
    ~Zak

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    Quote Originally Posted by SpanishStudentNeedsHelp
    I need help making sure this makes sense in Spanish:


    !Bienvanido! Este es mi sala de clase. Hay unos pupitres delante de las ventanas, y destr's del escritorio y la puerta. Hay unas tres mapas y un cartel en la pared. La compuatora, el ratón, y el teclado es en el escritorio. Hay es una mesa delante de la mapa. El reloj la puerta en la pared delante.


    Please point out ANY mistakes, as this is a rough draft for a major grade!!

    Thanks,
    ~Zak
    Hi, Zak! I have pointed out the mistakes I found for you to work on them. The ones in green are typical mistakes, mainly derived from gender. The ones in blue are more serious, but not terrible: remember you are learning; therefore, you need to make mistakes. The underlined sections are not very clear and should need rephrasing.

    Hope you find my notes useful!
    Guadalupe

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    Ahh,


    Thanks a bunch! Today we are going to peer edit, but these your notes will definitely be more stable than my peers'.


    Thanks again,
    ~Zak

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