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    I am certain that there are some errors in my Spanish translation. I am new to the Spanish language, but I tried my best to translate it. Any help/corrections would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

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    During the summer, me and my friend Steve went to Myrtle Beach, South Carolina. The trip to the beach was very exciting. The long drive from my house to the beach took seven hours. We went to the ocean when we arrived. The (blacklisted word) at the beach were very beautiful. After we went to the ocean, we went to a water park. It was very hot and humid outside. At night we drank many beers and went dancing. The parties at the beach were fun. During the day we relaxed and played basketball and football. We went home after five enjoyable days at the beach. I will always have memories of this vacation.

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    Durante el verano, mi and mi amigo Steve fui a Myrtle Beach, South Carolina. El viaje a él playa ir muy emocionante. El largo paseo en coche de mi casa a él playa tomar siete horas. Nosotros fui al océano cuando nos llegamos. El chicas en el playa eran muy bonito. Después de nosotros al océano, nosotros fui a agua parque. El era muy caliente y húmedo afuera. A noche nosotros bebemos muchos cervezas y ir bailamos. El fiestas en el playa estar divertido. Durante el día nosotros relajado y jugamos baloncesto y futbol. Nosotros fui hagamos después de cinco agradable días en el playa. Yo deseo siempre tengo memorias de este vacaciones.

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    Quote Originally Posted by kobeallday
    I am certain that there are some errors in my Spanish translation. I am new to the Spanish language, but I tried my best to translate it. Any help/corrections would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

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    During the summer, me and my friend Steve went to Myrtle Beach, South Carolina. The trip to the beach was very exciting. The long drive from my house to the beach took seven hours. We went to the ocean when we arrived. The (blacklisted word) at the beach were very beautiful. After we went to the ocean, we went to a water park. It was very hot and humid outside. At night we drank many beers and went dancing. The parties at the beach were fun. During the day we relaxed and played basketball and football. We went home after five enjoyable days at the beach. I will always have memories of this vacation.

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    Durante el verano, mi amigo Steve y yo fuimos a Myrtle Beach, South Carolina. El viaje a la playa fue muy emocionante. El largo paseo en coche de mi casa a la playa tomó siete horas. Cuando llegamos fuimos al océano. Las chicas en la playa eran muy bonitas. Después de la playa, fuimos a un parque. Hacía mucho calor y había mucha humedad. A la noche bebimos muchas cervezas y fuimos a bailar. Las fiestas en el playa son divertidas. Durante el día nos relajamos y jugamos baloncesto y fútbol. Volvimos a casa después de cinco agradable días en el playa. Siempre recordaré esas vacaciones.
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    Durante el verano, mi amigo Steve y yo fuimos a Myrtle Beach, South Carolina. El viaje a la playa fue muy emocionante. El largo paseo en coche de mi casa a la playa tomó siete horas. Cuando llegamos fuimos al océano. Las chicas en la playa eran muy bonitas. Después de la playa, fuimos a un parque. Hacía mucho calor y había mucha humedad. A la noche bebimos muchas cervezas y fuimos a bailar. Las fiestas en la playa son divertidas. Durante el día nos relajamos y jugamos baloncesto y fútbol. Volvimos a casa después de cinco agradables días en la playa. Siempre recordaré esas vacaciones.

    Hi..
    Mem your translation is great!! just a few minor corrections (sorry couldn't help it!! )

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    Quote Originally Posted by pames
    Hi..
    Mem your translation is great!! just a few minor corrections (sorry couldn't help it!! )
    Hi pames! Gracias por tus correcciones. Había demasiados errores, algunos se me escaparon. Saludos!

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