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    s ser the correct choice here?
    Here, in some of the best soil in the world, the stunted stalks of Dave Timmermanís newly planted corn are wilting in what sometimes look more like rice paddies than the plains, the sunshine glinting off of pools of collected water

    Aqui,en laparte de la mejor tierra en el mundo los talloa atrofiado de Dave Timerman maiz plantů nuevamenteee se marchitando ser en lo que mira a veces se como arrozales que la plantas,el sol que destella de picinas el aqua reunio.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dunleavy
    s ser the correct choice here?
    Here, in some of the best soil in the world, the stunted stalks of Dave Timmermanís newly planted corn are wilting in what sometimes look more like rice paddies than the plains, the sunshine glinting off of pools of collected water

    Aqui,en unas de las mejores tierras en el mundo, los tallos atrofiados del maiz recien sembrados de Dave Timerman se estan marchitando de tal forma que aveces parecen como arrozales envez de planos, el sol destellando en las picinas de aguas recolectadas.
    That's as best as I could do it.
    Maybe someone can make it better?
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    Some small corrections:

    maíz recién sembrado (singular as you plant corn, not stalks)... se están marchitando en lo que a veces parece más bien un arrozal en vez de praderas mientras el sol centellea en las pozas de agua embalsada.

    (and piScina).

    I'm not so sure about collected water. Doea it mean those pools were made to collect water? Or are they some kind of natural pools?
    Last edited by Goodnightmoon; 06-17-2008 at 01:33 PM.

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    Thanks for the accents moon!
    I can't do them on my computer, not that I know where they go! That's my downfall...the accents...was never good in spanish or french....always knew how to write/read/say it, but never remembered where the accents went!
    And ditto for catching that missing S in pool!
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