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    Default Homework help 2

    I have a graded homework assignment due I need a proofread on some sentences that i wrote. Please revise in the most simple way possible.

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    7. Yo salgo mi casa por la escuela y yo trabajo en la cafeteria.

    8. Yo trabajo con Charlie, Walter, Roger y los mujeres muchos.

    9. Nosotros hacemos la comida mucho por los estudiantes mil o mas.

    10. Después yo trabajo yo regreso la casa.

    11. Yo me quito la ropa de trabajo y yo pongo en el piso.

    12. Yo entro en el baño y ducho.

    13. Yo lavo el cuerpo con el jabon de neutrogena.

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    Hi gguiher, I suggest making the changes below.

    Good luck


    7. Salgo de mi casa para la escuela y trabajo en la cafetería.

    8. Trabajo con Charlie, Walter, Roger y muchas chicas.

    9. Preparamos comida para mas de mil estudiantes.

    10. Después del trabajo regreso a casa.

    11. me quito la ropa de trabajar y descanso en el piso.

    12. entro al baño y tomo una ducha

    13. Me baño con jabón de neutrogena.


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    Post # 8

    Hello,

    I just wanted to point out that number 8 could also be, depending upon the context:

    "Trabajo mucho con..." etc.

    If you're indeed saying that you work with many women, I agree with the translation / revision above! However, if you're emphasizing that you work often or a lot, and it happens to be alongside women, then I'd go with the second.

    Hope this was helpful and keep up the good work!

    Un saludo

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    Default Watch out on No. 11

    I initially read number 11 as you take the clothes off and put them on the floor, which would read "Me quito la ropa de trabajo y LA pongo en el piso."

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