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    Default Need a poem translated for my girlfriend

    below is the poem - if anyone can translate it into Spanish I thank you

    HER PICTURE IS ON THE WALL BUT IT’S NOT FRAMED

    He feels
    thousands of strands
    of black hair
    brushing back and forth
    against his stomach.

    He pushes her bangs aside
    for a better view of her mercy.

    When he looks down at her
    she seems to be smiling.

    He wonders if she really enjoys
    what she is doing.

    She wonders if
    she is doing it right.

    She glances up for a second
    and then continues
    - musing over the irony
    of his pained expression
    and desperate pleading
    not to stop.

    They both persevere.

    Each one thinking
    the other
    is in control.

    (David Curtis)

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    Default Espero que te sirva.

    Hola! Soy de Argentina, asíque ojo! las palabras y sus significados varían acorde al país. Pero con esto creo que vas a andar bien.
    No encontre la palabra "musing" en ningún lado. Creo que no existe. Te puse "meditando" porq me pareció que iba. Fijate.


    SU FOTO ESTA EN LA PARED PERO NO ESTÁ ENMARCADA


    El siente
    miles de mechones
    de pelo negro
    cepillando hacia adelante y hacia atrás
    contra su estómago.


    El empuja sus explociones a un lado

    por una vista mejor de su misericordia.


    Cuando el la mira hacia abajo
    ella parece estar sonriendo.


    El se pregunta si ella relamente esta sonriendo
    que es lo que ella está haciendo.


    Ella se pregunta si
    ella lo esta haciendo bien.


    Ella hecha un vistazo hacia arriba un segundo
    y luego continua
    - “meditando” sobre la ironía
    de su expresión dolorosa
    y desesperado le ruega
    que no se detenga.


    Ambos perseveran.


    Cada uno pensando
    el otro
    está en control.


    (David Curtis)

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    Default Thank you

    Thanks for taking the time to do that.

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    Its ok. No problem!

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