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06-24-2007, 09:49 PM
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Need someone to proofread my translation
Hello, I am a new member, and I am happy I found this forum. I want to translate a flyer for my church, from English into Spanish. I did the translation but I want someone to proofread it for me. It's an invitation to a praise service. Here is the text:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- God Over All This service offers the perpetual and non-stop praiser the opportunity to literally "Praise Till You Drop". Praise is what God loves and we as his people shall without restriction and without fail "PRAISE THE LORD". If this describes you, save the date and come and receive your blessing. Theme: Get'Cha Hands Up! Friday, july 20, 2007 7:00-9:00 p.m. My translation: Dios es sobre todo
Alabanza hasta que cae! Este servicio ofrece la oportunidad a la persona que perpetuamente, que no se detiene de alabanzar, de literalmente “Alabanzar hasta que cae!”. Alabanzar es lo que Dios ama y nosotros, porque somos su pueblo, debemos “Alabanzar al Señor”sin restricción y sin cesar. Si reconoce usted en esta descripción, memorice esta fecha, y viene para recibir su bendición. El tema: “Las manos arriba!” El Viernes, el 20 de Julio de 2007 De 7:00 a 9:00 de la noche. Your help will be appreciated. Thanks  |
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06-25-2007, 04:49 AM
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Change "alabanzar" por "alabar". At the end: "si usted se reconoce en esta descripción, agende esta fecha y venga a recibir su bendición"
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06-25-2007, 07:33 AM
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Dios esta por encima de todo
Alabe hasta caer Este servicio ofrece la oportunidad a la persona que no deja de alabar, de literalmente “Alabar hasta que cae!”. Dios ama la alabanza y nosotros que somos su pueblo, debemos “Alabar al Señor”sin restricción y sin cesar. Si Ud se reconoce usted en esta descripción, anote esta fecha, y venga a recibir su bendición.
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06-28-2007, 01:40 PM
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Thank you very much.
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06-28-2007, 01:47 PM
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you're welcome!
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