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    The training module is part of the SARS system, which emerged in order to improve the efficiency and quality of the processes of the Training and Development department. This module has the funtion to register all training of employees with the intent to evaluate their professional growth and ensure them a career within the company base on their competencies.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ivelcon
    The training module is part of the SARS system, which emerged in order to improve the efficiency and quality of the processes of the Training and Development department. This module has the funtion to register all training of employees with the intent to evaluate their professional growth and ensure them a career within the company base on their competencies.
    Hola ivelcon! No sé si este texto viene del español o no, pero sí te puedo comentar que la palbra "funtion" debería aparecer como "function". También queda mejor como "This module has the function of registering...with the intent of evaluating...ensure a career for them within the company based on their competencies."

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    Hola ScottJ,

    Gracias por la ayuda. Tengo una duda, yo se que si usas el "FOR" el verbo que le sigue debe terminar en ing, ¿también sucede esto el "OF"?

    Saludos

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    Default Re: Esta bien redactado este texto?

    Otra opción:

    The training module is part of the SARS system which was created to improve the efficiency and the program quality of the Training and Development Department. This module tracks the training of all employees to assess their future professional growth and to guarantee them a career with the Company based on their skills.

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    The training module is part of the SARS system, which emerged in order to improve the efficiency and quality of the processes of the Training and Development department. This module has the funtion to register all training of employees with the intent to evaluate their professional growth and ensure them a career within the company base on their competencies.

    The training module is part of the SARS system, which emerged in order to improve the efficiency and quality of the Training and Development department process.
    This module has the funtion to register all training of employees with the intent to evaluate their professional growth and ensure them a career within the company base on their competencies.

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    Default Re: Esta bien redactado este texto?

    aun que no creo que vale la pena, debe ser "processes"

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    en este punto ya me es igual.
    te dejo calidos saludos

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