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    Quote Originally Posted by jmelynn505
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    Buenas,

    Te comento varias cosas que desde mi punto de vista deben modificarse urgentemente:

    1. No es necesario el sujeto en la oración inicial.
    2. "Estamos comprometidos" suena bastante inglés.
    3. Altamente - casi es anglicismo.
    Saludos,

    Utgi

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