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Originally Posted by mrei
Did you leave was in your offer on purpose or just by mistake? You first suggestion was to change it to got.
It really sounds more fluent now. Do you think a comma after "and, as recorded in our files, his grades are as expressed below:" is necessary as well to make it clearer?
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I don't think it was I who suggested got. I put was in on purpose...I don't like the sound of "got admitted". Yes, a comma after and would be more fluent I think.