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vicente · 05-26-2009, 05:08 PM

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Originally Posted by mrei

This is what I've done:

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CERTIFICATE OF STUDIES

In the City of Asuncion, Republic of Paraguay, on the 4th day of MAY of 2009, the Attorney NAME, General Secretary of the Universidad Americana (American University) Certifies that:
Mister NAME, I.D. NUMBER and RUA (Student Record Number) NUMBER (got) was admitted (in) to this academic institution in the year YEAR , having taken (successfully completed) the required subjects of the [curriculum, academic program, diagram curriculum, course structure, course of study] in the field of COMPUTER SCIENCE ENGINEERING and as recorded in our files, his grades are as expressed below:
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Native English speakers! Your suggestions are welcome too.

Best regards,

Mauricio.-

Eliminate the word "the" from Attorney.
Substitute "was" for got and "to" for in.
Either place a comma after year of capitalize Having

My offer:

CERTIFICATE OF STUDIES

In the City of Asuncion, Republic of Paraguay, on the 4th day of MAY of 2009, Attorney NAME, General Secretary of the Universidad Americana (American University) Certifies that:
Mister NAME, I.D. NUMBER and RUA (Student Record Number) NUMBER was admitted to this academic institution in the year YEAR , having successfully completed the required course of study in the field of COMPUTER SCIENCE ENGINEERING and as recorded in our files, his grades are as expressed below: