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Old 05-15-2009, 08:41 AM   #3
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Default Re: i need this asap!!! thanks!
Buenas,

Te comento varias cosas que desde mi punto de vista deben modificarse urgentemente:
  1. No es necesario el sujeto en la oración inicial.
  2. "Estamos comprometidos" suena bastante inglés.
  3. Altamente - casi es anglicismo.
Saludos,

Utgi
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