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Old 01-06-2007, 01:20 AM   #1
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In this point, the expectations of earning a great deal of money quickly often turned out to be as unsubstantiated as the dream of a family reunion. Thus, the general tendency of these groups were to continue living in Japan but with their families, the decisions were taken in different circumstances and based on personal and social network’s point of views.
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