Thread: Neutral Spanish
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Old 12-30-2008, 07:58 AM   #9
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Default Re: Neutral Spanish

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Originally Posted by Dragona
Por favor no mande a su estudiante (to make it neutral) a la escuela con calsado que es un peligro para estos dias que especificamente son sandalias/chancletas/chanclas/sapatillas/etc.

Hi Dragona, if you don't mind, I'd like to make a few corrections to your sentence above, since it contains a few spelling and grammar mistakes:

"Por favor, no mande a su hijo (if you say estudiante, are your text is intended to be read by parents, you are basically implying that their sons are "their" students!) a la escuela con calzado que sea peligroso (or better yet, "que no sea conveniente") para estos días: sandalias/chancletas/chanclas/zapatillas"

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