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Old 09-29-2008, 11:57 AM   #2
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Default Re: Esta bien redactado este texto?

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Originally Posted by ivelcon

The training module is part of the SARS system, which emerged in order to improve the efficiency and quality of the processes of the Training and Development department. This module has the funtion to register all training of employees with the intent to evaluate their professional growth and ensure them a career within the company base on their competencies.

Hola ivelcon! No sé si este texto viene del español o no, pero sí te puedo comentar que la palbra "funtion" debería aparecer como "function". También queda mejor como "This module has the function of registering...with the intent of evaluating...ensure a career for them within the company based on their competencies."
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