Your translation is excellent ScottJ. You did a wonderful job, specially taking your time to translate this long letter.
I would just make a few changes:
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You are truly a special person, and I am lucky to have met you.
Eres una persona especial de verdad, and tengo suerte de conocerte.
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"Eres en verdad una persona especial y tuve la suerte de haberte conocido."
In this case it's better to use the past perfect in Spanish.
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I care for you and for your well being
Tu y tu bienestar me importan.
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this translation is ok but I would like to propose some version.
"Me preocupo por ti y por tu bienestar"
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... but that only proves one thing, that my love for you is very strong, sincere and true.
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pero eso demuestra nada más que mi amor por tú es muy fuerte, sincero, y verdadero.
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another version:
...pero eso solo demuestra que mi amor por ti es muy fuerte, sincero y verdadero
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Every word came from my soul filed with emotions.
Cada palabra vino de mi alma, llena de emociones.
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"Cada palabra salió de mi alma"
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I want you to be happy, and I want to make you happy
Quiero que estás feliz y quiero hacerte feliz
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"quiero que seas feliz y quiero hacerte feliz."
I just wonder would he say "Te quiero" or "Te amo" when he says "I love you..."