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MariaLaura · 04-16-2008, 05:48 PM

Hi! I have some comments that might be useful.
" The Ivy English Academy is a place for students at all levels to develop their English language skills."
I think that students at all levels means beginners, intermediates or advanced in english, so the translation for that could be "Ivy English Academy es un lugar para los estudiantes de todos los niveles que quieran mejorar sus aptitudes para el idioma ingl�s"

Ivy English Academy le ofrece a estudiantes y profesionales la mejor cualidad de instrucci�n de ingles con un amplio centro de aprendizaje. I think it should be "calidad" instead of "cualidad"

"Nuestros estudiantes beneficiaran de cursos dictados por profesores". "Se" is missing. Nuestros estudiantes se beneficiar�n...

At the completion of the course, students will have a strong command of the English language and be prepared to succeed and advance in their professional and academic careers.
Al finalizar el curso, los estudiantes dominar�n el idioma ingl�s y estar�n preparados para triunfar y avanzar en sus carreras acad�micas y profesionales.

I hope it helps!

04-16-2008, 05:48 PM	#4
MariaLaura Contributing User Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 126 Rep Power: 76	Hi! I have some comments that might be useful. " The Ivy English Academy is a place for students at all levels to develop their English language skills." I think that students at all levels means beginners, intermediates or advanced in english, so the translation for that could be "Ivy English Academy es un lugar para los estudiantes de todos los niveles que quieran mejorar sus aptitudes para el idioma ingl�s" Ivy English Academy le ofrece a estudiantes y profesionales la mejor cualidad de instrucci�n de ingles con un amplio centro de aprendizaje. I think it should be "calidad" instead of "cualidad" "Nuestros estudiantes beneficiaran de cursos dictados por profesores". "Se" is missing. Nuestros estudiantes se beneficiar�n... At the completion of the course, students will have a strong command of the English language and be prepared to succeed and advance in their professional and academic careers. Al finalizar el curso, los estudiantes dominar�n el idioma ingl�s y estar�n preparados para triunfar y avanzar en sus carreras acad�micas y profesionales. I hope it helps!