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Originally Posted by krispity6
A nuestros nuevos amigos con mucho amor de Canadá. Gracias por hacer este el mejor viaje de nuestra vida. Las extranamos de tanto. ˇTenemos ganas de verle otra vez pronto!
Amor siempre y para siempre Becca y Jenna
xo
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Buenas,
I think that it gets your points across very well and would only make a few suggestions:
1. "este" needs and accent over the first "e," differentiating it from "este" which comes without an accent (for an elaborated explanation, please send a message or refer to wordrefence.com or your preferred grammar sources).
2. Instead of "con mucho amor," I would say "con mucho(s) carino(s),"* which allows for a friendly/warm tone versus a more serious one.
3. "Las extranamos" - I believe you mentioned that all the friends were male, in which case you would need to use "los," but in actuality it would be best to use "les extranamos."* Also, verle should be verles/verlos.
4. You might want to throw "Besos," "Besitos," or something similar at the end... I'm not familiar with the usage of "xoxo" in Spanish, so it might be perfectly sufficient.
I will never be a native speaker, however, so other suggestions are most definitely welcome!
Hope this was helpful!
Un saludo
*These words have accents over the "n." Please excuse my lack of accent capabilities!