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Originally Posted by Berliak
La forma especializada de su cuerpo y su pequeña cabeza oval, le aseguran al piojo que pueda moverse fácilmente por el pelo de tu cabeza.
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It sounds great. I'd watch out for the translation to oval, you're refering to the head so I'd say "
ovalada". The other thing I'd watch for is the way you refer to "
your head". The way you said it is not incorrect, but have you explored the possibility of saying "
la cabeza". This way you dodge that
"tu/su" deal that you get in Spanish when you refer to
"you".