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Old 11-27-2007, 06:08 PM   #6
Diablo
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Originally Posted by SandraT
No! you don't have to hide for expressing your feelings. I am sure Shakespeare must have felt something a lot more profound than what you're saying and never tried to hide... so, keep on writing and let your imagination fly, who knows where it may take you...
Thanks.
But I'm generally a shy boy. I would get thrown in the mud by kids at my school if they heard me talk like that.

Ode To Love



Careless whispers jokes
And companionship
Cheesy satire in
A mask parade


Desperation, ***
And ambition
Flood hearts of
Romantic lovers


The full moon
With a cozy
Coach watching
Tacky fifty movies


Oh do I wish
To do these
Undoubted things
Without minds consent


But as you
Are only my
Spirit I can


Only give you
My breath and voice
Though at times
I wish to touch your
Fair skin


Does this
Sound tacky and
Desperate or is
This, another Ode to
Love


I will bring
You into my dreams
Will you bring me
Into yours


Does this sound
Tacky and desperate
Does this make you mad
Does this hurt
You or am I the
One bringing
You down


These questions will
Always be locked
Because you only
Know my breath
And key strokes


I wish you
I miss you
Will never be
Said


This tacky poem
Expressing my one
Love


My one love
Who is here beside
Me in spirit
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